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When all the stars have lost their glow
and not a shell gems any shore,
When fragrant breezes cease to blow
and evening follows days no more -
When limpid streams no longer flow,
I may forget you, - not before.
Yes i wrote it myself. 4laugh
- by MrMisericorde |
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- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: Not forgotten
- Artist: MrMisericorde
- Description: A heartwarming poem about one love for another.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: forgotten
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Comments (4 Comments)
- MrMisericorde - 12/07/2008
- There, I've changed the Title, thanks for the advice. I suppose it was'nt really fitting was it?
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- a peace remaining - 12/05/2008
- Very nice! This is MUCH better than the cheap imitation poetry that generally stocks this arena. However, I do wish that you would re-think the title. "Forgotten" doesn't really seem to fit, does it? [I know it doesn't really matter-- such a tiny detail!] 5/5 [<- The first 5 I've ever given]
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- End~Moraine - 12/05/2008
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Ah, yes! Do you know how hard it is to find poetry in the Arena that isn't borderline-emo and totally cliche!
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed it! - Report As Spam
- MrMisericorde - 12/05/2008
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so, how do you like it?
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