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Friend
Freind, a thing that money can't but
friend, that comfort you when you cry
friend that we never lost
friend that loves us must
helping us through it all
helping us to rise in our faLL
helping us whenever we call
helping us with all heart and soul
memories that friend's share
memories that in our mind bear
memories that we are always fair
memories that will never be rare
thankful for the friend that like a sister
thankful for the friend that like a brother
thankful for you friend, i'll treasure it forever...
- by Yumi AP III |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: "Friend"
- Artist: Yumi AP III
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Description:
this poem is dedicated to aLL my fRiends..
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its aLL about a kind of friend...
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i hope you like it and vote this poem...
thank you!! - Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: friend
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Comments (7 Comments)
- -The Murderous Shade- - 04/19/2010
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Unfortunantly...
This Poem is a bit...
How you say....
Extravagant.
What? Thought I'd say something bad?
Anyways 5/5, and thank you for your comment before.
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- ZeldaXnXRainbowsss - 12/10/2008
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Fortunately, this poem is good.
Coolness, very artsy.
<3333333 - Report As Spam
- Yumi AP III - 12/09/2008
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thnks for commenting...
keep on voting./...
^___^ - Report As Spam
- SilentStarAngel - 12/05/2008
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This is poem is exactly how people feel for their friends.
I especially love the part when you wrote, "Memories that will never be rare."
5 out of 5 this poem deserve.
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- Hey Nero - 12/04/2008
- I don't care what anyone else says..this poem was deep AND IT DIDN'T DESERVE A 3/5 BUNNIE VAMP, IT DESERVED 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!1 CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!
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- iBrightScales - 12/04/2008
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Eh, it's alright.
It's definitely not the worst I've seen, but also not the best.
3/5 - Report As Spam
- FujiRadish - 12/04/2008
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BraVO!!
5 =3 - Report As Spam
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