- darkness, look at the hands in front of you for the light is beginning to fade away. with the last glimpse, my how you've grown but your still so small. a flake of snow so hot out today? t'was the dawn of life. grab it and hold it for as long as you can because snow melts.
- Title: exsistance
- Artist: isthumus
- Description: the flake of snow resembles how even your life revolves.
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: life death
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- Call Me Biskey - 04/10/2009
- It needs more illiousons, something that people can see when they read the first sentence, this needs a lil tweak here and there but it's good, I'll give you that.
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- idaruishinee - 12/03/2008
- poetry that i can visualize is good ones to me ^_^ and this i did ;D
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- isthumus - 12/03/2008
- not the best i could come up with, but ill be damned before someone tells me it's half-brained
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