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Walking briskly across the way.
The sun is resting,
From the dawning day.
I watch as my breath,
Just comes and goes,
In little white puffs,
Cold as snow.
Wishing the sun soon would shine,
It’s nice yellow warmth upon me.
Ah, the feeling is so divine,
Even if for a moment.
I caught a stray leaf,
Floating on the breeze.
It begins to crumble,
Into relief.
Each step grows slower,
Heavy from little sleep.
The days grow cold,
As my mood runs deep.
- by White_Snow_Angel9603 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/02/2008 |
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- Title: Autumn
- Artist: White_Snow_Angel9603
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Description:
Something I was supposed to write in Language Arts...
I thought it was pretty nice so I decided to post it 4 all to see.
I don't really like cold weather... obviously....
*hides under thick blanket*
brrrr.... - Date: 12/02/2008
- Tags: autumn season cold winter
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Faerie - 11/04/2009
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i love your style, very elegant and flows nicely!~
Well done!~ biggrin - Report As Spam
- Scarlet_wings1490934 - 12/26/2008
- Beautiful XD
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- tabby_cat_1224 - 12/10/2008
- lol its good i think the end needs a lil work but its good
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