BLOOD ROSE

• Artist: demon_of_cruelty
• Description: ive tried this arena 1 other time and im going for it again...i made this poem one day when most of the things happened to me. i have more poems on my profile on the bottom if you want to see some more of my work
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: blood rose

He walks through the woods on what some would say
The worst possible day
His girlfriend was caught cheating
And his big brother took a big beating
His dog ran away
And has been gone for more than a day
The book of his life is coming to a close
As he stumbles upon his first blood rose

Just as he is thinking of ending it
He finds a mitt
The book of his life is just about to close
For inside the mitt is his second blood rose

While walking on the path
He decides to do the math
One more rose and it's over
Holding his pocketknife he falls
It peircing his heart
The book of his life is closed
For infront of him is the final blood rose

Comments

[Night Angelic]

i agree with the person under me the girl 2 spots under is wrong it was good. and it did ryhme but not all the time but peoms dont always ryhme.

[XxXMr_JizzXxX]

peron below me ir rong and i love it

[princess xyra]

if you are doing a poem.....be sure it is ryme.....you just writing a word not a poem!

[Elizabeth BEW]

it is depressing but very well done. i like it.

[Vedante the Squishy]

dude, depressing.