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i'm cryin in the inside
but i've always been
the friend who supports even though
i wish it were me instead of her
why do i give so much and get nothin back
i just want the best and i finally got it
but everything is going down hill
i just feel so confused right now and i don't know
who to trust is it you i told you how i felt
but you left me hangin what do i do
you give me mixed signels
i try gettin away from you but you keep bringin me back
with more question then the last time
just answer this question before i do somethin stupid
do you like me or not ??????
i'm tired of all these signals
you says all thins i want to here
then you go to the next girl and ask her out and look at me
why do you look at me when your with every new girl
are you tryin to hurt me????
stop teasin me if you anit goin do anythin
you got me stressin on thinkin about you
when i could be happy thinkin bout some one else
but once i get over you
you drag me back with somethin else
so i'm tried of tryin she can have you
i'm goin to be happy instead of sad as heck
she can have the tease , the heartbreak, the flirt and i'll have
everything better
- Title: tears of my heart
- Artist: pvt_pixie
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Description:
this poem is what i wrote when my guy friend and the guy i liked got a girlfriend who i hated btw . . my friends liked and said i should submit it and find out if its really good or not
this is like really old i wrote it in like 5th grade i think and finally found it
plz tell me how i can improve it thx - Date: 11/23/2008
- Tags: tears heart
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Comments (3 Comments)
- xXDmoRainbowsXx - 01/20/2009
- it needs no improving...its great the way it is
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- AvatarAeang - 12/26/2008
- i don't think it needs to be improved, you're just a natural poet.
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- sarah-jane123 - 12/15/2008
- I LOVE IT!!!! i love your name tto, the twilight books are SO good!!!!!!!!! <3 smile - my name is NOT sarah-jane.
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