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LOVE
a feeling that strikes fast
a thing that may hurt us...
an expression so sweet...
that all of us can feel
HE
a boy so cute and charming
he is the one i am really dreaming
i loved him with all my heart
but he just did me nothing..
ME
a girl that is hurt by foolish love
i wish i am free as a dove
im waiting and longing for love
that one day a man can let me feel about
KNIFE
The one he holded for long
and used to slash my skin
and hurted me so much
until im in pain of dying
BLOOD
flows out through my veins
going out of my wounds
scattered all over the floor
while im lying there alone
SCAR
a thing that i have now
and will never be removed
i will never forget what he did
but now i forgive him...
MEMORIES
all i had for now,
which is all bad for treasuring
but theres no any other thing...
i can keep but this bad feeling...
- by liu_pingyan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/19/2008 |
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- Title: Hemorrhage
- Artist: liu_pingyan
- Description: a simple poem i made myself... hope you like it..........
- Date: 11/19/2008
- Tags: hemorrhage
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Pale_Life - 11/25/2008
- .....not too bad I guess.....
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 11/23/2008
- no. I didnt. it had a cool flow but a lame subject matter. and btw, the word is "HELD" not "HOLDED"
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