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Ive been sitting here staring at the clock on the wall.
And Ive been layin here prayin prayin he wont call
its just another call from home you get it and be gone
and ill be cryin.
and ill be beggin you baby beg you not to leave but ill be left here
waiting with my heart on my sleeve oh for the next time we`re
here seems like a million years and ill think im dyin what do i
have to do to make you see he cant love you like me gonk
why dont you stay im down on my knees im so tired of beein
lonely dont i give you what you need when she calls you to go there is
one thing you should know we dont have to live this way baby why dont
you stay sad
you keep telling me baby there will come a time where you will leave his arms and forever
be in mine but i dont think thats the truth and i dont like being use and im tired of waiting its to much pain to have to beg to love a woman you have to share
why dont you stay im down on my knees im so tired of being lonely dont i give you need when he calls you to go there is one thing you should know we dont have to live this way baby why dont you stay
i cant take it any longer but my will is getting stronger and i think i know just what i have to do i cant waist another minute after all that ive put in it ive givin you my best why does he get the best of you so the next time you find you wanna leave his bed for mine
why dont you stay im up off my knees im so tired of bein lonely you cant give me what need when he begs you not to go there is one thing you should know i dont have to live this way baby why dont you stay sweatdrop cry heart gonk
- Title: stay
- Artist: Cody7377
- Description: stay is a good song i wrote.its about me and another girl that has a husband ive been dating and so she keeps leavin me early when her husband calls her and she gos home every time.
- Date: 11/17/2008
- Tags: stay
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Blackhawk Girl09 - 03/17/2009
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wow.
that's really good.
you just need to tidy it up some.
put punctuation in it, seperate the lines better. they seem too long in some parts. i keep goin and then have to stop and take a big breath cause your sentences keep goin.
also, some spelling errors, but still good.
just go thru, clean it up a little, check for errors, and fix the stanzas.
i know it's a pain, but it'll make it tremedously great!
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