Scary Things

• Artist: PR1NC3SS T1G3R
• Description: I made this up when I was in the shower, sometime before Halloween. I make up the best things at the most random moments! It makes me feel like i am reading someone else's mind, because whenever I try to make up a poem or something, I can't do it.
• Date: 11/15/2008
• Tags: scary things

Things at night
Fill me with fright

I lock the door
And tiptoe across the floor

Jump on my bed
And cover my head

Tell myself
That's there's no one else

But then I hear a noise
And I stand up poised

Ready for attack
But it's just... the cat.

Comments

[schemilix]

Oh I know the feeling...

[Moon-Muffin number 8]

Ahh, I like your suspense!

[xBeautiful_Earth_Fairyx]

Sugoi! I can't write poems for the life of me. LOL, I thought there was going to be a killer or something. Not a cat XD Very good. 4/5

[A Story Worth Telling]

This is funny! Very cute and creative. A few things I'd change, though: The second line of the second stanza has too many syllables, so the rhythm seems off there. Also, instead of using ellipses at the end (...), I'd just have a line break. I think that'd add to the effect.

Still, I liked this! It would be great in a collection of children's poetry. smile

[Hime_Mizuru]

What a funny poem.!^^

[iiLil_emo_PuppeTii]

wow. that was awesome!! i thought someone would come out of no were!! well keep thinking in the shower. need ideas!? check me out!

[the_weird_1]

LOL! I love this short poem!