Free Love

• Artist: SquigglyRain
• Description: A poem I wrote for my boyfriend before we started dating...
  It was actually how I asked him out.
  
  I'm kinda shy...
  So I just ran up to him at a party, gave him this poem on a napkin, and waited for him to read it.
  
  What surprised me most...
  Was he answered with a kiss.
  
  Thats how I knew we were supposed to be. ^-^
• Date: 11/08/2008
• Tags: free love

I've tried so hard.
I've been so close.
I've given it all
And lost what mattered most.

I can't stop myself
You can't stop me.
It's like a disease
And it poisons me.

I care too much for my own good.
I can't stop myself even though I know I should.

All this love I have
I need to give it away.
Keeping it all saved...
Well it rots me away.

How can something so pure hurt so much?
How can all I want be someone elses touch?
I wish someone would just accept my love.

I don't care if yours is real.
I don't care if you fail to feel.
Just take mine away from me
Take it please!
It's free.
heart heart heart

Comments

[ChiquitaChacon]

so beautiful I wish i could write stuff like that. I write poetry too except mines mostly about sad,depression,sucidal stuff.
I liked your peom alot (: 5/5

[Chunokura]

Knowing you & him aunt Nuka...
I'd say this is sickeningly cute.
Mostly because you two are always...cute. :3

[aixoria]

awww!! *squirms* that is so cute!!!!!

[xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx]

smile thats so sweet!

[--FallOnMe--]

Aw that's so sweet! Well done!

[HyperGirlee5050]

awww thats sooo cute! truth be told, it MAYYY be one of THE most romantic things i've ever heard! i mean, how u asked him out w/that poem and everything is soooo cute!