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"Will he come?" You say as you wait under the sakura tree awaiting his arrival.
He'll come if he loves
He'll call if he likes
He won't if he hates
"He will I know." You know they say that being under the Sakura trees for too long can confuse you.
"He'll come! He'll come!" He won't dispite your beuty of a face
He's not the one for you.
Look at you.. Your crying..
"SHUT UP! SHUT UP ALREADY HE'S GOING TO COME!" He won't.
"YES HE!---"
"Hey baby why are you crying?"
"It's nothing. Nothing I'm just glad you didn't stand me up."
"Who would? I mean with your personality and your looks. I'm the lucky man here."
Hmm I guess he came after all.. The lady hid behind the tree so the young man couldn't see him
"I'd never leave you behind. Never.."
He whispered into her ear.
"I love you.."
She said
"I love you too.."
He replied
Well I'm going to go.
The old lady thought to herself and she left.
Bang bang! Shots came firing out. Bang bang! He hit the ground.
Shocked she stayed there with blood on her face.
Someone has murdered her boyfriend.
He has left.
She has stayed.
She fell to the ground bursting into tears
BANG BANG!
More shot out
BANG BANG!
She bled out
"At least.. -cough cough- We won't die alone.."
With that said,
Her eyes shut slowly.
Sakura pedels fell ontop of them.
They both met atop in heaven,
where they fell in love once more.
- by -xXKokon_HatakeXx- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/06/2008 |
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- Title: In the End We Stay
- Artist: -xXKokon_HatakeXx-
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Description:
PLEASE READ FIRST OR YOU MIGHT NOT UNDERSTAND
The bold are the actions
The ones that are normal is a lady talking
The "Quotas" is a young woman talking
And the italicize is the young man talking.
There.
Date it was done: 11/02/08
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Please rate and comment :3 - Date: 11/06/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kasai Shinigami - 12/14/2008
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nice kokon
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- -xXKokon_HatakeXx- - 11/29/2008
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A Narrative Poem, yes it is a poem.
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- Percat - 11/11/2008
- Is this a poem?
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- gommenasai - 11/07/2008
- interesting caught my attention ....
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