I Wish To Be a Whisper

• Artist: Edward Trivusky IV
• Description: Ok, so who cares if it doesn't rhyme. I don't, so if you like open poetry this is a good one. I think its pretty good.
• Date: 11/06/2008
• Tags: wish whisper love

I wish to be a whisper,
swimming softly on your tongue.
I wish to be your maiden,
skin sparkling in the sun.
I'll strive to be a word,
spoken softly just for fun.

I long to see you turn,
and look into my eyes.
I long and I yearn,
from sunset until sunrise.

I am not a whisper,
not as soft as a kiss.
I'm no fair maiden,
and I cannot promise bliss.

I tell you though,
I give you my word.
I will be a whisper,
spoken sweetly in a sonnet.

I wish to be a whisper,
so I can whisper in your ear,
a sweet, simple "I love you."
A small little whisper,
for only you to hear.

Comments

[tksunshine93]

truly beautiful!! and i have something to say....whoever said poetry has to rhyme or is best that way obviously wasn't a poet!!!!!!!!
i like it very much good job

[Insane Jester646]

i applaud for you,
your poem is wonderful, it has good rhymes, but you don't really need them, i can say, it shows good feelings
but other than that i give you a 5/5

[Edward Trivusky IV]

Why thank you. ^_^

[St Mario]

it doesn't need to rhyme dear
it is already beautiful the way it is

very beautiful indeed...

love it very much