War

• Artist: Vansephanine
• Description: Hokay...
  So I wrote this at like...4:30 in the morning, while I was getting ready.
  I like it.
  If you don't then that's fine, but don't be a jerk.
  Yes, I know some things are spelled wrong, but they are like that for a reason.
  So don't bother to point them out.
  Constructive criticism please?
  DO NOT USE IT WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!!!!
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: love hate death dying

Toxic souls
Obsessive goals
Paving the roads to hell

Nuclear war
Unnecessary gore
The children are dying for love

Little boys cry
Oasises die
As everything gets destroyed

Clowns will lose
All their balloons
As the shockwave hits the sky

Butchers will carve
Babies will starve
In this twisted dance called Life

Intoxicated men
Incompetent Women
Sprinting their way towards death

Insubordination
Discombobulation
The metal birds doth fly

Lowly souls
Corrupted goals
It's starting all over again

Oh, happy day!
Won't you come play
This fabulous game called
WAR

Comments

[tksunshine93]

Wow...very powerful!!! You have some serious talent!!! I love your play on words!!

[Mika Demon Sealer]

this is a really good poem but i was wondering why you chose those thing over others, and is this how you really feel about war?

[xxxemoprincessxx]

wow that is the best most awseome poem i ever read!!!

[Vansephanine]

Thanks!

[Isinforyou]

very good biggrin wow ur pretty good at this so am i biggrin but im a song writer biggrin