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To rely on a star
That is so far
A whispered wish to the sky
Even you don't understand why
You trust a little fairytale story
And you're left to worry
If quiet words could reach out
Maybe you should try to shout
But once more you look out to the night
As your heart battles and fights
Whether or not to trust something
That may have happiness or misery to bring
To wish upon a twinkling star
That still shines from afar
"Just one more wish..." you say
Then you kneel down and pray
"May this one wish come true
"I pray for the world to be born anew
"And violence to come to an end
"This is the prayer I send."
Out in the sky the star continues to shine
And you silently hope that everything will be fine
Because you relied on a star
That glows with promise from afar.
- by Hidden Shadow Love |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/26/2008 |
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- Title: To Wish Upon a Star-rewritten
- Artist: Hidden Shadow Love
- Description: I wrote this poem last week I believe and I wasn't too proud of it so this the new version of it. I hope you enjoy it! And please comment! Especially if you see any grammar/spelling mistakes. Thank you.
- Date: 10/26/2008
- Tags: wish upon star
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Kurai-Purple - 04/14/2009
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i love it! it almost sounds like lyrics to a song
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- Tsunami From Hell - 12/29/2008
- omg i love this poem too biggrin YOURE AWESOME XD its amazing and magical
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- Xx Epic Phail xX - 10/26/2008
- That is a beautiful poem. ^_^
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