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• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: its about a friend who i am rather nervous about and worried about what she is not telling me.if she is reading this even though i told her not too.i only wrote it cause i care not cause of anything else im just worried about what your not telling me,mabe its nothing but mabe its not rate and comment all,if you comment ill comment you back if you want.
  
• Date: 10/22/2008
• Tags: hide

your hiding
the things i see and hear
are a mask over whats real the truth

what you are and what you write
is it real?
is it the truth
what can it be
that you hide behind your mask
ive wondered why
what are you afraid of
ive wished what can it be

curiousity boggles my mind
what is it that scars you
it taughnts me
what you write
mkaes my mind scared of what your not telling

what is wrong that i cant see
this is not for me i wish to know
it is for you

for your pain you hide to which i never see b
but every while i see a touch of it
the 'it' that brings you into your dome of pain

im here yet somehow you cant see me
i shout and shout yet you dont hear me
is it that you cant hear me or that you wont hear me

you wont let yourself believe
that mabe you need help

your never goning to understand
that i speak out of care and care alone

help me help me
these words are words
i never want to hear from you
but these are words i feel you need to say
save yourself and let me help

by srd sakura

Comments

[brenda4509]

i like it

[hert_10]

i just love ur writing...n i do understand how u feel..yea yo do care about ur frend... coz ive been on this situation before sad be optimist ok wink

[Ms Make Me Smile]

thanks for commenting

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

I could turn this into a perfect journal entry with nary a word change.

Stop posting, Sakura.