Swans In The Night

• Artist: A Special Little Girl
• Description: Hey .... Hope You Vote For Me ... :)
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: swans night

Three Swans
Under The Moon ,
Three Shadows
On The Lagoon .

Three Swans
On The Water Ride ,
Three Shadows
Move Beside .

Silver Water ,
Silent Swans ,
Swaying Ferns
With Silvered Fronds .

A Strolling Cloud
Obscures The Moon ,
Gone The Swans
From The Dark Lagoon .

By Jazmine 4laugh

Comments

[Toxic-Nii]

This Poem Is Nice I Like It >.<

[`Roguey]

I really like this, i'm surprised no one else has commented.
Nice structure, very compact and "to the point."