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When hearts do break, and love grows cold,
When flowers die the trees grow old,
If I died would I be remembered,
Would I still be me or my image hindered,
Children run,
From the man with a gun,
A single coffin found,
In the wet, muddy, soggy ground,
A child murdered before it is born,
The doctor with a smile blazing with scorn,
A room with a bright light,
A single blast in the night,
Blood splattered on the floor and wall,
They walk away while bodies fall,
A mother goes and inflicts abuse,
A five year old hoping it could have been of use,
The body goes limp and frail,
The baby feels it was a fail,
An older sister cries,
While her parents decide that the unborn baby dies,
All was lost and their was no pain,
Bodies buried in the pouring rain,
When hearts do break, and love grows cold,
When flowers die the trees grow old.
- by his_little_opheliac |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/10/2008 |
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- Title: bloody voilence
- Artist: his_little_opheliac
- Description: I wrote this in class and absolutely love it. It is about all the things in the world that I hate...... Voilence.
- Date: 10/10/2008
- Tags: bloody voilence
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Fenpex - 01/05/2010
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Wow, finally someone who knows how the fuuck to write poetry on Gaia.
Very well written... I must say I'm very glad you included the abortion thing in there.
Most people would try to shy away from that topic in hopes that people won't be offended.
This is probably the best written work I've found on Gaia so far. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Kookyfan - 10/11/2008
- hey!!not sure if you remember me lol but I loved your poem,just want to let you know really quick though is that its violence ok. 3nodding hehe sorry about that goodbye!!!
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- iStrain - 10/10/2008
- Wow... Amazing.
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- Medicated Violence - 10/10/2008
- That was excellent! Big Fan.
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