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what happens when you finnally drop from that suposedly everlasting drop of love
what happens when you finnaly touch the ground and you realize you never should have fell in the first place
you realized that instead you were pushed
when you realise that that wasnt the right person and they just left you forever falling into a pit of doom
what happens when you start to question why you let yourself fall in the first place
why didnt you grab on to something else for support
something else to keep you from dropping
because when you hit the ground
you feel yourself more hurt than any wound could ever do
what happens when you get up and brush it off and start over agin
its a vicous cycle
choose wisely for who u let push you because you could end up falling and loosing everything else you hold near to you
- Title: when you reach the bottom
- Artist: xTierraXx
- Description: when you drop
- Date: 10/07/2008
- Tags: reach bottom
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Comments (2 Comments)
- anon_x-x_returns - 10/07/2008
- you have some grammar mistakes, mostly in spelling but also in using past tense in some cases. giving the poem a body and stanzas would have made a deeper impact in the reading.
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- Metal queen123 - 10/07/2008
- good
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