My Victim, Your Blood

• Artist: YukinoMerodi
• Description: i spent two nights on this and i LOVE IT...tell me if you love it.
  
  
  well like one of my commentors said..I did use a lot of "blood itself. '
  so I reworded some things. hope you guys like it. (:
• Date: 09/24/2008
• Tags: victim your blood vampire

As the moon rises and shine,
In the darkness of the night,
You can see my eyes redder than blood itself.
You can see my fangs drenched in gore
For I am a vampire.

As the moon rises and shine,
In the darkness of the night,
My eyes will take color of your vital fluid.
I will feast on your blood itself.
For tonight you are my victim.

Comments

[DawnLii]

Cool. I LOVE VAMPIRES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Delicate Justice]

I like it... Good poem... I love vampires... lol. =]

[Pure_Dove]

Its good, but the "blood itself" is too repetitive....
u should edit that..