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Do you do you have a soul
Or can you drink it from a bowl
Do you do you have a heart
Or is it to weak to start
Can you can you love me
Or are you despising what you see
Just answer me this
Am i destined for bliss
Will you take it from me
Should i keep hoping to see
A future with you that includes me
living together happily
Can you Can you love me
or am i doomed for eternity
If you can love
Let me be your dove
I do trust you
Dont make me look like a fool
I will be your tool
The thread on your spool
Can you Can you love me
Or should I jump from a tree
- by Evil_Genius_Chemist |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/21/2008 |
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- Title: Do You
- Artist: Evil_Genius_Chemist
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Description:
A love song that isnt finished
I had remarkable inspiration to write it - Date: 09/21/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- 290DarkStars - 01/27/2009
- i like it... but it could be smoother... but with passion in your heart.. thats all you really need.
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- Call_Me_Deb - 01/19/2009
- That end line sets the tone for me, but a little Seussy. 4 stars
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- -Dark-Light_Memmories- - 09/24/2008
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i like it. 5/5
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- The_Master_of_Meep - 09/21/2008
- best thing i have read all week and thats the truth
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- Evil_Genius_Chemist - 09/21/2008
- thank you
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- luv_c0oki3 - 09/21/2008
- Luv it
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- Kiryuu Yuuki - 09/21/2008
- Hmm i love it, your good at writing
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