Fire Claim Thy Purity - Poem

• Artist: RiverDaNile
• Description: Just something I thought of one day...
  
  ~MLI
• Date: 09/15/2008
• Tags: fire claim purity poem

Fire burns through pinked flesh
Upon epic roses,
Clean and wet
Through skin,
Through fabric,
Through pain,
And through love,
What is it men are shrinking from?

Her red, red hair,
Scorched and singed.
Her clear blue eyes,
That speak of sin

Through hellish deeds
And heavenly pleads,
That fulfills her ghoulish needs.

An epic beauty,
Loved by all,
Feared by man,
Face like a doll.

Through fire she hordes
Upon broken fingernails
Blood covered boards

She beckons death,
And all its beauty,
"Come forth,
And claim thy purity."

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

so a girl is very bueatiful, men fear her, and relates to death. wat i got from this is the girl is a succubus (a demon, usually from a ritual gone wrong, that uses her body to entice ppl and eat their flesh). good poem tho

[ll Tears of Joy ll]

I think this poem is very good
The words are good and ranged