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“What I Deserve”
Im not gonna make you feel that way anymore…
I'm going to go through heavens door.
I gotta make this right,
It seems I wanna die tonight.
Shouldn’t miss my Flight
Im gonna fly Into the Middle of night.
I can see the light..
This is the end of the line..
Wee look up at the sky!
It looks so damn beautiful tonight.
Its much too bad Im gonna die…
*chuckles*
Pre-Chorus
Well maybe you’re just not worth it anymore
Because I know you want more,
Please tell me queen,
When you gonna come clean?
When the ******** are you gonna tell me all your ******** dreams,
Cause I know they’re not with me,
And I know they’re not complete
Youll do whatever it takes
Even though you might not make it,
So why even try?
You make me wanna die….
Chorus (Distortion):
Leave me alone, I cant take this anymore!
I gotta go through heavens door.
All this bullshit needs to stop, lets end it here!
Cause its obvious the message isn’t getting through your ******** ear!
But anyways…
I gotta make this right..
Im gonna end my life tonight..
I think its really sad..
And the same time it makes me so mad.
Why cant we I go through with it?
I think a lightbulb in my head just lit..
Pre-Chorus:
Oh my god, you still want to fight?
I thought we were done with this, please tell me Im right,
Your word are giving me a headache, I cant take it that much longer,
But whatever doesn’t kill me only makes me stronger,
You look at me, and see regret,
I hope my death isn’t something you forget,
I gotta make up my mind,
Am I gonna live or am I gonna die?
Either way, everythings only been a ******** lie…
Chorus (Distortion):
Leave me alone, I cant take this anymore!
I gotta go through heavens door.
All this bullshit needs to stop, lets end it here!
Cause Its obvious the message isn’t getting through your ******** ear!
But anyways…
*Solo*
Chorus (Distortion):
Leave me alone, I cant take this anymore!
I gotta go through heavens door.
All this bullshit needs to stop, lets end it here!
Cause Chorus (Distortion):
Leave me alone, I cant take this anymore!
I gotta go through heavens door.
All this bullshit needs to stop, lets end it here!
Cause Its Obvious its not getting through your ******** ear!
But anyways…
Ending:
When you think it out it all seems weird to you..
And you keep asking yourself what the hell you are going to do.
Well I can tell…
(Distortion)
If I died tonight, Life was a waste.
I gotta stay awake, and develop different taste.
Its not a race, I can take my time..
It seems I wont have to die tonight..
Your lying to me and getting on my last ******** nerve!
I can tell you this, this is not WHAT. I. DESERVE.
*Ending solo*
Distortion end….
- by Retardbiscuit69 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/11/2008 |
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- Title: What I Deserve
- Artist: Retardbiscuit69
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Description:
A song I wrote a while back when I felt suicidal.
Irs not my best work,
But thats what poured out of me during a fight me and my ex had over the course of two hours.
All that happened over the course of two hours.
Please rate And comment. - Date: 09/11/2008
- Tags: deserve what
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Comments (3 Comments)
- 9 ate 7 - 03/05/2009
- I must say I like ^^
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- God Is A PopStar - 09/11/2008
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Over all it is really good, I must be honest, I skim read it.
In the first two lines I spotted something that does not make any sense what so ever. The line "Im gotta go through heavens door." I think that it should be something more like, "I'm going through Heaven's Doors." that makes more sense and it gives you more to build on.
Please, work on this, I would love to read a polished version, maybe even hear it sung with music someday. - Report As Spam
- kosumakansu - 09/11/2008
- whoa. that is great
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