Hav u ever loved someone?

• Artist: Albel Nox 29
• Description: The poem has to do with love
  
  this is my first piece of writing that I've ever shared, so sorry if it isn't good...
• Date: 08/28/2008
• Tags: love

Hav u ever loved someone, but they only liked you as a friend?
Hav u ever loved someone, but they were with someone else?
Hav u ever loved someone, but they didn't know you loved them?
Hav u ever loved someone, but you waited too long, and lost them?
Hav u ever loved someone, but you knew that you two wouldn't be able to be together?
Hav u ever loved someone, but they were too blind to notice it?
Hav u ever loved someone, but who you thought loved you back, didn't?
Hav u ever loved someone, enuf to do anything for them?
Hav u ever loved someone, and everybody knew, except for that one person?
Hav u ever loved someone?

Comments

[LynSayzWTF]

Yes i did... And i loe this!!! whee

[XDZenLeeDX]

Very nicely composed i guess i culd say. Im not good with poetry vocab d: but yeah, this is really good and kinda sad..
Is this from experience??

[darknesstae]

Beutiful.

[I Sinistro I]

I think this needs a bit of editing. I think you should have put more effort into this. Yes, I got the message and all, but. . make it more friendly to the eyes. It just looks like a large block of 'txt tlk' to me. All in all I think it's pretty good. Just edit it to make it more presentable.

[magioula]

that you wrote.....is veeeeeeery beutiful and i'm sure that everyone will find at least one of your questions very close to him or her..... i match with this "Hav u ever loved someone, but you knew that you two wouldn't be able to be together?"...... you're doing very well at writing... keep doing this.... kisses!