I am Here

• Artist: Dark Desire27
• Description: I know it's not the longest poem u ever seen, but it's not long it is that matter it's the words.
  I was kind of bored last nite and then thought of my boyfriend came to mind so i started writing.
• Date: 08/22/2008
• Tags: love

Your there for me day or night
I wouldn't trade u from anything, just wanted u to know
In this life ur all i need and all i want
So with this i give u my heart
I may not say this as much as i should but baby when i say i love u i mean forever
Cause with u i can be myself
With u by my side i know ur always going to catch me b-4 i fall
With u is where i belong
I am trying everyday to show u ur the only one for me encase tomorrow never come
But believe this your love is all i need
And i will love u till me last day
So take my hand cause baby i am here for u day or nigh, sun or rain, i am all urs
I will always be here for u, cause i love u more than u will ever know heart

Comments

[Hello Worldss]

I like it 5/5, rate back please

[khonnen]

Don't listen to what Seras_Victoria12485- says, it's very good. Yes, I could be worked on a little, but why go through all the trouble?! 4/5

[vardo5]

You're.

[Seras_Victoria12485]

I am sorry to give a negative review, but, please don't use shorthand when writing, it kills the work of poetry. Also, try to revise it again, and see the difference since there is and the things that could be changed.