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She walks right by me like I don't exist.
She thinks of my just as a friend.
It's like I'm hidden in a thick shade of mist.
And I'm longing to be with her to the end.
- Title: A poem I just wrote
- Artist: ncaa fan
- Description: This comes from my heart
- Date: 08/08/2008
- Tags: lovepoetry
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Comments (6 Comments)
- oX-silent-rose-Xo - 07/05/2009
- Great Job! very expressive and captivating!
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- ger_bear01 - 07/05/2009
- how heartfelt
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- onionio - 01/31/2009
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I thought it was very insightful. It might have been better if it were a bit longer. Good job!
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- Mud99 - 12/18/2008
- CAPTAIN PLANET!!!!!!!!!!!
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- xkunoichixkimix - 12/12/2008
- I understand how you feel many times I have been passed up for my friend. the girl below me has no idea what shes talking about... this is very heart felt.... 5/5
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/11/2008
- God. Damn. Pathetic. You need to learn how to write...not just poetry...but coherent thoughts. Garbage! 1/5.
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