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She's too far from me , that can't take with walk
When i'm sad and lonely and need someone to talk
We're torn apart by destiny's will
Without my feelings that she should've feel
She never knows the feelings i hide
When she left me alone , she doesn't know that i cried
It hurts me a lot , yes it hurts me like hell
When she made me fly , and then made me fell
She surrounds me with love , surrounds me with fame
Gives me the hope came from heaven's name
But now i'm alone with no one to lean
In this battle of love that i ain't gonna win..
- Title: My Love Story
- Artist: EmoDanza2
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Description:
this is my real love story..
but it's only a part of my long love STORY
please rate this and comment.. - Date: 08/01/2008
- Tags: love story real
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Comments (4 Comments)
- fishay95 - 05/09/2009
- could do better. but its bettr then i could do
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- -SoiWasLike - 03/10/2009
- no offense but its not very touching and yes u can actully do better
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- Beowulf Reincarnate - 08/01/2008
- Touching and all... No offense, it just seemed to me like you sacrificed meaning in the name of rhyme. I believe you could do much better.
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- iiBanqSmilez - 08/01/2008
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aww that's so sad and touching
5/5[rate me too] - Report As Spam