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She looked around,
There was no sound,
She had a feeling,
She got down kneeling,
As she sat a feeling crept upon her,
She tried to speak, her words turned to a slur
She stared up in the trees,
Then back down to her knees,
Just then, something scared her,
Everything was a blur,
Sparkles flew,
Then she knew
Life was too small
Live it right now,
She smiled huge,
Then she knew,
It was all over,
The sparkles disappeared in the clovers
She got up and looked around,
She looked down at the ground
She sat in the patch of clovers,
She looked at the flowers
Her thoughts were broke,
Because, she awoke
- by Luna Lovable Lovegood |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/01/2008 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- graywolfmarc - 01/04/2009
- I dont like how you tried rhyming er ur
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- BearyViolet - 12/17/2008
- I didn't really like it... Some of the rhymes were repetitive and boring. 2/5
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- CazzyxBear - 12/14/2008
- you used the same lines over and over. that makes it boring. instead of doing that, try making it shorter. first four lines were the best. 3/5
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- Luna Lovable Lovegood - 08/03/2008
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