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im like what to you baby
if i ask will it be a maybe?
cause I've gotten that alot
and now im sick of the plot!
If im like this
are you gunna be his?
when you walked i was in pain
but now im standing in the rain!
im alive and well
you've fallen down a well!
Lets see how good you do.
when im not there for you.
If you see me in pain
its cause of your game.
Time will tell
but your locked in a cell
trapped and hidden
lost and forbidden.
Taken and forgotten
in my life your rotting.
Ill put you on your feet
cause you im that sweet.
Im like what to you honey?
you use to make me sunny.
but now im happy without you
lets see hat you do.
- by xXElvish CasperXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/22/2008 |
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- Title: I'm like what?
- Artist: xXElvish CasperXx
- Description: this is 1/4 songs i have written so far so i hope you like! ill post the other tree
- Date: 07/22/2008
- Tags: like what
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Comments (3 Comments)
- XuXue - 07/29/2008
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i love the rhymes!
i think the rhyming words r difficult 2 find and u've put much effort into this. Ur song also tells a flawless story, therefore, i think u did a exceedingly good job <3
altho my poem is not as fine as urs, but come and rate my poem. It stars next month, i think, leave a comment 4 me 2.
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- ShuaiZai - 07/29/2008
- nice
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- Chaotically Imbalanced - 07/22/2008
- It rymes to much...Every two lines ryme...Songs aren't like that...Too much yming makes it sound annoying...Sorry
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