A song for u

• Artist: -stevlecheng-
• Description: this is a song i made ^^
  its not rly good but i think it got some potential ^^
  ps: if i made some error tell me i will edit it ^^
  pss: um.. ok i see i made some errors .. somes you you need to put a r after so it makes your
  idk why it dosent let me edit my song -.-
• Date: 07/21/2008
• Tags: steviecheng song

when you cry
I will stand by
Helping you going
Until I see you smiling

Each time your falling
I will be catching
You wont be dying
Just keep trying

Never give up
Stop crying and get up!
I will kick you butt
If you don’t get up

When everybody gets on your nerves
And when you think it’s a curse
Work on trying
Keep on smiling

Your drowning in sadness
Your only seeing bitterness
You think your swimming in sadness
Don’t worry its not hopeless

Never give up
Stop crying and get up!
I will kick you butt
If you don’t get up

You think your alone
Your not allowed to the play zone
You think you will rut to the bone
But you friend wont let you alone

You think life is unfair?
But life is not a fun fair
Just don’t worry
Just be happy

The last words I could say
Is to you to go play
But instead
I will say
Never give up
Stop crying and get up!
I will kick you but
If you don’t get up

Comments

[Belatan]

I love it! It makes me think of some of the things I have said to my sisters and my bestfriend. Totally Awesome! 5/5

[iNeenee]

its nice! really good. 3nodding did make little errors in it though. i help you fix them ^-^ i give a 5.

[rosemidnight17]

lmao! It made me laugh and it would be a great poem for some one who has given up. well done. 4 stars. smile