A Place where there's no moon

• Artist: carmobc93
• Description: Ok, here's a little poem, I wrote it cuz i felt inspired... I hope it opens up some hearts
• Date: 07/21/2008
• Tags: turtore abuse sadness stars moon

I look outside my window
The stars shine for me
They tell me: Everything will be fine
But I just want to hide

I look outside my window
It's my peaceful moment of the day
He's not at home
"Don't worry!" they say

I look outside my window
A sight that I'l never forget
The freezing wind gently blowing
I can feel my heart growing

I look outside my window
But there's nothing to see
A car aproaching, it breaks my heart
It will turn my world apart

I look outside my window
As the devil turtores me
Would it be different
If he could also see?

I look outside my window
The stars wink at me
They will take me soon
To a place where there's no moon..

Comments

[xXsista-number-5Xx]

hey again! I can't get sick of this poem its so nice... wink don't u guys agree?

[xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx]

this is good!

[xXsista-number-5Xx]

I GET IT! oh my god this is so toutching. For those who don't really get it its all about a girl or something who is hit at home so she's thinking about the stars and how they are free and in the end she is so hurt that she know she will soon die... oh my god i love u so much! This is the best poem ever!

[Atheshya]

What's it about? I suggust you write more so it's possible to tell what the subject matter is.