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This is just to say,
I have been senseless,
and selfish,
I was blind and unable to see,
you deserved another chance...
to live;
and which you tried,
but could not sustain
that weak life
that hung by a thread.
Forgive me for not being able
to hold on for you;
you were so small,
so bright,
You longed to be free...
But now it is too late,
so forgive me for not being able to see.
- Title: This is just to say
- Artist: Zeimarlu
- Description: *shrugs*
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: forgive senseless selfish
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Comments (6 Comments)
- BitterYetSweet - 07/22/2008
- :] its good.
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- The Goddess Eclaire - 07/22/2008
- Sad...that is sad. It sounds like a story about a miscarriage. sorry if that is insulting or anything
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- Rozoko - 07/20/2008
- Despite the absence of a rhyme scheme, you pulled off a rather nice story. It flowed really well. Very impressive. 5
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- Rainbow And A Smile - 07/20/2008
- Both of yours are really pretty. I like them a lot.
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- rosemidnight17 - 07/20/2008
- i def like this. lol you shrug like its nothing but its really good. whatever or whoever you were speaking of in this poem sounds so delicate. like a glass bird. wishes to be free and yet so breakable.
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- X_iiSmExiiAshleyy_X - 07/20/2008
- um... tHatz beAuTiFuL!!
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