The Shadow's Captive

• Artist: -Thomagata-
• Description: .....yeah, well I have no clue why I wrote this but i think it's fabulous. you could say this is a very late halloween poem. can anyone guess what it's about?
• Date: 07/20/2008
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This little room is home to me,
And all my special thoughts.

In here the shadows are kind to me,
In here they are so soft.

I am tied and chained to my thoughts,
In here no one speaks.

Except the special men who come,
And ask me so many things.

They ask and ask but I dare not speak,
I never say a word.

So the men all leave my special home,
They leave me through that iron door.

....................................

This little room is hell to me,
And all my bleeding wounds.

In here the shadows all torture me,
In here all is lost.

Comments

[Rozoko]

I think it's someone in a psychiatric ward. Anyway, not bad at all. Little to be desired of a rhyme scheme, but it flows really well. I give it a 4. Would give it a 4.5, but gaia won't let me XD

[greenshock792]

i'm guessing someone in an insane asylum...
its good keep it up ^^

[geek_chic_38]

this is awesome! is it about someone in prison?

[hanvel123]

cool lol