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Confusion loves things that break apart.
It inflicts lonely pain on those of pure heart.
Recently, It took a friendship so deep in feeling
And left thoughts of love and neither friend was smiling.
Confusion, in our awkward silence, scoffed at us two.
Confusion, like myself, wanted me to hate you.
I never meant to hurt but for you to forget.
I thought if I could quiet this pain, our lives would be set.
People got involved, which should never have been.
Confusion thought at the time that It would win.
He then wrote her two sides of a poem so lovely,
She then wrote a two-sided narrative for Confusion to see.
So you still care even though Confusion still holds me.
God will give us all time for us to see.
Even if percussion holds me to the staff,
Our friendly brass concerto is a diad.
- by brokenbarrier |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: Confusion's Control
- Artist: brokenbarrier
- Description: For those band geeks out there, you must know that love in the band room is so common. But it's even harder when you find your best friend falling in love with you. This poem is for a friend that explains to him why I could not be with him... Because another band person was involved... (By the way, this is a double narration... Two points of views...)
- Date: 07/18/2008
- Tags: friendship band
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Comments (4 Comments)
- tachikoma-chan - 07/18/2008
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oh noooeeeezzz my smiley got messed up. (sry)
5 starzzz
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I really think that love in the band room is caused by the bandies having so much in common... and they're so nice! ^.^ - Report As Spam
- tachikoma-chan - 07/18/2008
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That is freakin beastly. [Band geeks all the way!]
It DOES say a LOT. It's really incredible. I think he understands now. : ] - Report As Spam
- Vampirebloodlust101 - 07/18/2008
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what he said
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- Master Woody258 - 07/18/2008
- wow. It says a lot.
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