Sleep

• Artist: Viral Agent
• Description: This suddenly came to me as I was listening to Eric Whitacre's "Sleep."
  None of the lines have been pirated from the song, I SWEAR.
  (No, really, I made sure of that)
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: dream sleep eric

As I submit unto sleep
I see your face rise before me
Soul asunder in the fading light
I struggle to keep your image bright

But I find, falling back into the darkened sea
You've found a joy in following me
I begin to dread the destined dawn break
When this dream disappears
and I awake

Comments

[Lovers Never Tell]

Grammar and punctuation. Good idea, but blandly ended.

[The Flower Seller]

beautiful... 5/5