April

• Artist: Christene~Half-Angel
• Description: It's short, but sweet. This is one of my only happy ones, so I prefer to use it. Enjoy
• Date: 07/16/2008
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The winter air no longer bothers my skin.
I feel spring come,
Wrapping it's warm sun along my arms.
The bright mornings light up my eyes
With an all new sensation.
The fear of night that had once crawled up my back
Has been replaced with the anticipation
For a new day to begin.
Wake me, my Spring,
And let me love you for another morning.

Comments

[Kailua angel]

Wonderful! Are you a professional writer?

[Darling_daughter_faye]

Should winter in line one be capitalized since spring in line 9 is?
Maybe split - The fear of night (space) that had once crawled up my back
?

[SesshoumaruLover186]

it was good.

[Eleiza0250]

play around with line breaks and punctuation; you need something to make it have more of an impact, more variation.