Insanity

• Artist: Lutzifer23
• Description: one of the first things i wrote please to hack it to peices with rude comments constructive critizism is all id like to accept if its gonna be a negative comment that is possitive is always accepted =)
• Date: 07/15/2008
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Insanity
Is plagueing me
please help me
if you care for me
Insanity
is plagueing me
please help me
if you care for me

Insanity
Rolls like a crazy sea
It is killing me
Insanity has taken me
but it comes and goes
like a crazy ghost
This insanity
Someone please save me

Insanity
is plagueing me
please help me
if you care for me
just a life line
is all i need
to set me free
of this insanity

This insanity
just angers me
it wont let me free
of its deathly grasp
so please help me
since you care for me
this insanity
is beating me
if you wont help me
than i cant wait to see
this insanity
start to defeat you

This insanity
is plagueing me
please help me
if you care for me
it angers me
just a life line please
this insanity
has just beaten me

Comments

[Zlae]

All I saw were the words 'Insanity'.... everywhere.

[Ariana DeLiese]

Good effort! Just a little too much alliteration of the word 'insanity', but generally you have good form and it has the possibility of tweaking it to perfection, as there were a few lines that were repeated way too much.