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It's this day we remember seven years ago
When grief and anger shook us head to toe.
A blinding smoke and a blazing fire.
Both growing, spreading, higher and higher.
Lives were lost along with dreams.
All of them torn apart at the seams.
Husbands, children, parents, wives.
Nothing can, or will compromise
The tragedy that is 9/11.
It quickly becomes the past,
But it never leaves our minds.
It happened way too fast
To leave it all behind.
Lives were lost along with dreams.
All of them torn apart at the seams.
Husbands, children, parents, wives.
Nothing can, or will compromise
The tragedy that is 9/11.
This devastating attack,
Will it happen again?
It's the answers we lack
Of why, where, and when.
Take a moment of silence
And bow your head in respect,
As we remember the violence
And mourn for the dead.
- by -MoNoTonE_PaNToMimE- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/14/2008 |
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- Title: 9/11
- Artist: -MoNoTonE_PaNToMimE-
- Description: I was planning on writing a song in remembrance of 9/11 actually on the day, but I was caught up in things so I ended up writing it this morning. My inspiration for this song is pretty obvious, unless you don't know what 9/11 is. Constructive criticism/suggestions are appreciated!
- Date: 09/14/2008
- Tags: nineeleven
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iA D M I N LEAD - 09/15/2008
- aw,4/5 D:<
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- blaneyi - 09/15/2008
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is very good, (it be honest it made me cry bcuz like i lost 3 family members in 9/11) hehe. it had a nice sense of rhythm
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- -MoNoTonE_PaNToMimE- - 09/15/2008
- -Thank you all so much! I'm really glad you like it, and I appreciate the fact that you all understand the deep meaning of the song.-
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- Fangthorn - 09/14/2008
- I like it. Although I don't like the event. Good job on carrying the sorrow into the song.
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- stallion_elmo - 09/14/2008
- This is really good. Bravo! 5 stars!
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- im_fun_size - 09/14/2008
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i love it
i wish i could
write something
like dat so deep n refreshin
5 STARS WOWOWOWOWOWOO - Report As Spam
- xXxDark_BriexXx - 09/14/2008
- I love it!!! It is sad, but very good!!! 5/5
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