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Her heart isn’t broken,
For it was never whole.
But when certain words were spoken,
They went straight to her soul.
But it was all for nothing,
And now she knows,
Some things are better left unspoken.
She dreames of the day,
When it will all be okay.
For that is what Dreamer’s do.
They hope, they dream,
Hence, their name.
But her hopes were asunder,
and she is starting to wonder
If it was worthless to follow.
Her hope is gone,
And her dreams are hollow.
Her heart isn’t broken,
For it was never whole.
But when certain words were spoken,
They went straight to her soul.
But it was all for nothing,
And now she knows,
Some things are better left unspoken.
She turns to face the future,
It can’t be worse than the past.
You’ll get through this just fine,
Life is yours to design.
One more time,
She vows.
One more try, then I’m done.
She can’t take any more disappointment.
She’s already had a ton.
Two ways to look at it: she risks it all
Or she risks none.
And then everything fails,
But there is no difference.
It’s just another scar.
Add your own preference.
Her heart isn’t broken,
For it was never whole.
But when certain words were spoken,
They went straight to her soul.
But it was all for nothing,
And now she knows,
Some things are better left unspoken.
All along,
To survive this has been her
Unspoken wish.
She’s only kept fit
To find the unspoken message.
And it was there all along.
She just couldn’t hear it.
Her heart now can be broken,
For, now, it is whole.
When the message was spoken,
A heart was placed in her soul.
It wasn’t for nothing,
Because now she knows,
The message is no longer unspoken.
And now she can dream
To no limit’s that she knows.
This life was hers to design,
And now everything glows.
She feels more than fine.
She is as cheery as can be.
At least she gets
A happy ending.
- Title: Unspoken Message
- Artist: Nikki4815
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Description:
Sometimes, I get randomly inspired by a poem I read recently, music (usually music) or my own imagination. I just finished writing this, and I wanted to see what you guys thought. By the way, I always enter stuff in the arena's in my Mule. If you want my real name, PM me. Comment, and tell me what you think.
**Note: I am a storywriter. Not a poet. I don't post my stories, because I guard them as I would my child.
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: unspoken message
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Comments (7 Comments)
- SilvertongueSagittarius - 12/11/2008
- im sorry dear but it's kinda already been done.like 3345654754724572546 times. 2/5
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- Nikki4815 - 12/11/2008
- *screams* I'm still in first! last time it was only for like 30 seconds, but it's been a whole...like 5 minutes! Mark the date, this HAS to be a record.
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- U-kno-U-want-2-B-me - 12/11/2008
- that was good
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- AngeI Flonne - 12/11/2008
- I use to be there....but only for a few minutes T ^ T
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- Nikki4815 - 12/11/2008
- BTW, people, check out my gallery for my other stuffs too!
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- Nikki4815 - 12/11/2008
- Yayz! First in the spotlight! Let's make that last!
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- Only Becca - 12/11/2008
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Thanks for the rate. ^_^
This is very good. A few words could be switched around here and there to make the flow better, but overall it is lovely and sends a beautiful message. Excellent. 5/5
Theory, I think Julia meant that the rhyming scheme used here is a bit choppy and hard to follow, not that every poem must have a rhyme scheme. =) Just to clear it up. - Report As Spam