from depressed to okay

• Artist: sports_girl1122
• Description: i let out everything that i needed to
  and i figured out why im depressed
• Date: 12/04/2008
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i let it out
i dont know why
i let it out
now ill die
i let it out
cuz i couldnt take it
i let it out
and i couldnt fake it
i let it out
and i guess its ok
i let it out
and ill live another day
i let it out
and i guess i wont die
i let it out
and i now i dont cry
i let it out
and i feel good inside
i let it out
so theres no more to hide

Comments

[millionaire alcoholic]

No one's going to tell you it's good because you told them to. They have their own opinions without you telling them. Dont make excuses. If someone gives you critism, thend eal with it. Dont make excuses to make the poem work better. Because it dosnt work. It actually looks much better. So learn to deal with critism, or dont post poems here.

[millionaire alcoholic]

I let it out,
And I guess I wont die,
I let it out,
And now I dont cry, (ok?)
I let it out,
And I feel good inside,
I let it out,
So theres no more to hide.

Maybe if you put it like this, people would take you more seriously. And YOU'RE being the b***h. No one is going tot ell you what you want them to. No one's going to say it's good, if they didnt think it was ebcause you told them to. Welcome to the Arenas. Comments are for critism. And if you dont like it, then disbale the comments

[millionaire alcoholic]

It wouldnt sound good with propper grammar?
Here let's see if it sounds worse shall we?

I let it out,
I dont know why,
I let it out,
Now i'll die, (what?)
I let it out,
Because I couldn't take it,
I let it out,
And I couldn't fake it,
I let it out,
And i guess its ok, (???. You just said in the begginning that you would die??)
I let it out,
And i'll live another day, (You only have one life.. Plus. If you believe in re-encarnation, then you wouldnt remeber if you lived before.)

[millionaire alcoholic]

Victoria. Let it ******** go. No one is ever going to know what you feel. So stop making poor excuses saying that they dont know. Because they dont. You dont know how good you have it. ZTo be at a blue ribbon school. Good friends. Your uncle is in the hospital. Ok. Fine. Some kids uncle's have cancer. Some kid's mom dies OF cancer. You dont know how good you have it. Learn to appreciate it.

[sports_girl1122]

thats wat im doing, but she is being a b***h

[sports_girl1122]

omg
i did that
because it wouldnt hav sounded right
if i used proper grammer and stuff

[TercesX]

Oh, and sure, nobody knows what you are going through. Sorry to tell you, nobody may EVER know what you are going through. You have to put that past yourself and become stronger. A great way to get rid of stress is to write out your emotions. Take my advice or leave it, and try to cheer up, 'kay? smile