love

• Artist: Beyond A Rebel
• Description: this poem i wrote because i got reminded of somebody that made me feel this way and i just hope he reads this and you like it
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: love

i love this feeling
a feeling so strong
i know this feeling
it wont last long
it is a new feeling
one that will open a new door
the door brings a smile
the smile brings a person
the person is everywhere
in your eyes
in your mind
in your heart
you dont want to let this feeling go
the feeling brings a person that is special
one of a kind
you feel like you have known this person for a long time
soon the feeling will fade away
like a song
it starts so loud
ends so soft it can end witha cheer
or a tear
the feeling will come again and again
you might not be able to find the special feeling
but it will find you
the feeling is strong
the feeling is
love
"ahh love "you say
please come again

Comments

[Beyond A Rebel]

thanx thats very nice

[Poetic Progression]

i like the poem, and i'm glad you feel that way about love. it's nice to know that there are people who have fun with love, instead of having it hurt them like a pernament cancer. *sighs* i wish love felt that good in my head....

[Beyond A Rebel]

thanx

[Doviculos]

really awsome poem 5/5 biggrin

[Beyond A Rebel]

thank u so much

[Jeyrin]

First!! Yay. I saw your comment on my poem, "Unspoken Message", so here I am. Thanks for being so kind, by the way. I like your poem, too. I give you 5/5. Not cause you gave it to me, but because I honestly think you deserve it.