- One upon a time a 14 years old girl name Annie went to the Cinema. Went Annie was buying pop corn a boy drop a soda. Went Annie see that she say:What a mess ! The boy yell at her and he say: if u are so worried about the mess come here and help me. She was so angry so she drop the popcorn. Went she was cleaning the mess, the boy look at her and he think: she is really pretty. Then she look at him and she think: he is handsome. Then he say: Hi i am Kevin. She look at him and she say: I am Annie. Kevin grab her hand and he say: Would u go out with me. Annie was nervous but she was in love with Kevin so she say: Sure i will go out with u. Then Annie go to her home. Next day Kevin call her. He says: Hey Annie i want to now if u want to go now to Pedles restaurant. Annie says: Sure. Went they were in the restaurant Kevin say: Hey u have something in your face. Annie says: Were is it? Then Kevin says: Here. Went Kevin was really close to her he grab her hand and he say: U will never forgot this. In than moment Kevin kiss her. Annie smile and grab her hand and then kiss him. They were i true love. Then Annie says: So now we are boyfriend and girlfriend? Kevin says: Yes. One month later Kevin went to a camp . Every day Annie write Kevin letters. Then one day Annie go to the airport to surprise Kevin because he was going back. Went Annie get there Kevin was holding a girl in her hand and he say: Oh Jessica you are cutest girl ever and i love u my babe. Then Kevin kiss the girl. Annie go to Kevin and he yell: How could u how could u?! Kevin grab Annie 's hand and he say: Annie, Jessica was my girlfriend so i just see her in this camp and i just wanna come back with her so this is a break up. Annie look at him and he says; Anyway i don't need u. Then he says: Maybe we can be only friends. Annie smile and she says: Well maybe,well ok. Then they hug and they say: Best Friends For ever. Then Annie says: Well u now maybe your girlfriend can joins us. Then he says : Deal ok.
- Title: First boyfriend
- Artist: Abbyale
- Description: Annie get a boyfriend. Then cute and bad things happen.
- Date: 06/20/2010
- Tags: romantic friendship breakups reallycutestoryand fantasy
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- Light Arcana - 08/28/2010
- I have the idea what you're trying to express through your writing... but this time it reallyy didn't cut it(i didn't get that romantic feeling) You also have several grammar and spelling errors. But overall great story! smile
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