- i was walking with my love and then it hit me. I AM DREAMING. the problem tho is when i woke up there was a card that said "see you tomorrow if ur alive sleepy head." i thought for an hour then i got it "it must of been mom." i said aloud not thinking about what happend yesterday. she died in a car crash and it didn't look like her handwrighting. I just rembered that and i home alone anyway on fridays i pretty mutch draged my self down the step's across the hall across the family room and sat down. I screamed on the top of my lungs "who are you!?!?!" a man with a black jacket, jeans, and worst of all his shirt had blood on it i screamed agin and he ran at me. i woke up and sat on my bed confused. "how did that happen" i said shakeing
- by teh gurl in black |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/28/2010 |
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- Title: who are you!?!?
- Artist: teh gurl in black
- Description: i thought of this for an hr....tell me how i can improve please!
- Date: 05/28/2010
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Comments (4 Comments)
- bebibebi - 01/03/2011
- WTF.
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- Angela Person - 07/29/2010
- I can't really help you. This story is very confusing.
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- Gray Walls - 07/06/2010
- I Don't know i really--wait dont put Tho put though and have a better Plot
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- kidonabike - 05/28/2010
- there is no saving this poem. it makes no sense whatsoever. the plot is very skewed.
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