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The small man entered on the stage
He walked up to the microphone and adjusted it to his level
*Cough-Cough* He cleared his throat
There was a silence
All of a sudden, there was a annoying squeak
People started to complain and to leave
After an hour the little man left the stage
The announcer came up and congratulated the little man
- by DehHiddenAngel |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/24/2010 |
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- Title: Oh Little Man
- Artist: DehHiddenAngel
- Description: just something random, i was bored and i write all the time and here is one of them! Its a small short story..lol..it may seem stupid to you, but i like it
- Date: 03/24/2010
- Tags: little
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Krazy-Writer - 03/24/2010
- Not that it matters, but I think the entire thing would be strengthened if you cut the last line "that he had made a wonderful speech"...with the one before it we can assume that the little man already accomplished something with a job well done. It just adds more ambiguity.
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