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Traveling farther into the deep shadowy forest
I stop for a moment to listen to the curious sounds of this particular place
I look up at the darkened sky
not a single patch of light in sight,only raindrops falling from above
but then a sudden sound from far in the forest caught my attention
drip drip
drops of crystal water dripping from a tangled vine tree
that is definitely not the sound I heard
the sound I heard sounded like it was in deep pain
at that time I felt a shiver traveling down my spine
bum bum bum
my heart is racing fast as if its going to leap out my chest
stomp stomp stomp
I hear it
its coming closer and closer to me every second
sweat trickling down my forehead
I want to run, get away from this horrible place
only thing is...I can't
my feet won't budge
I can hear it entering through the tall trees
at this moment I can hear the deep growl coming from the pit of its chest
its coming
as I look around I see nothing, but the nature around me and whomever is approaching me
I'm alone
no one here to protect me
to secure me in their arms and tell me "its alright"
but its just me and this anonymous person in the cold dead forest
as I put my face into my hands, I think about what will happen to me
I stay in this position for a moment
then I lift my face up
now just five feet away I'm finally face to face with a creature
not a human being
but a wolf
it starts walking towards me
he whines in pain, then falls to the bare ground
I'm the only one who can help him
the wolf looks up at me with hurting eyes
my feet now moves out of its place
I walk forward to him
step by step
looking over the wolf
I come across a severe cut on its back left hind leg
I tear the bottom portion of my shirt and wrap it around his leg
the cut looks like it was from a knife...a hunting knife
he gets up, looks at me for the second time
this time, I'm feel that we're not alone
we continue walking
I look up at the trees
light is entering through the leaves
but then light fades away too soon,he looks at me
I think he wants to show me something
but what
we enter to a place further into the forest
I see crimson red stains on the ground
it leads to an animal
a wolf, it looks limp
my friend the wolf looks down and continues on
this must've been his dear friend
then out of the blue a knife is thrown and misses my head by an inch
it gets caught on a tree behind me
I examine the knife, it none other than a hunting knife
I see my friend growling at the trees twenty feet away, where a person is hiding
this was my enemy
the guy stepped out into view
and cocked his gun
he's ready to fire
his face was smothered in dirt and sweat
grinning showing his crooked yellow teeth
eyes gleaming in the dark
my wolf friend and I start to run for it
my heart is pounding even faster than before
my eyes start to come watery as I found out who it was
a person, a close person who betrayed me and my family
I hear a cry and a thump
he shot my friend
he crashed to the cold floor
I couldn't stop
I had to keep running
I'm alone once again
I cry as my legs become weak and limp
they can't move any longer
I stop, fall to my knees, I am breathless
my enemy stops, I can hear him breathing
he starts cackling and says,
"well well, I've finally caught you now!"
"why are you doing this?" I say
he stays silent
then cocks the gun once more
puts it to the back of my head
he's about to pull the trigger
I finally wake up
I'm sweating
I thought it was just a dream,or not it feels as if its real
or maybe a nightmare
I look out my window
I see the sky
shades of orange and pink scatter the sky
the click says 6:40 a.m.
I lie back in bed, thinking
was that real, did it actually happen
I guess I'll have to find out soon
- Title: What A Dream
- Artist: tacogurl0
- Description: Well, I wrote this story/poem of when I was dreaming about this. Forgive me if it sounds crappy.
- Date: 07/30/2009
- Tags: dream friend
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Comments (5 Comments)
- tacogurl0 - 08/08/2009
- woot woot! thanks for awesome comments guys.plz share it! smile
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- Mellowing - 08/07/2009
- omg. i love it. i can feel like i was right there watching it all happen. omg i love it!! i am going to book mark it on my computer. smile its so detailed and it seems so sad and i want to know what happens next!!! OMG!!! sorry im just a fan of these type of things. lol. write more!! please !!! sweatdrop
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- xxXookamikoXxx - 08/03/2009
- love it!!!!!
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- Gavin_The_Rocker - 07/30/2009
- cool...5/5
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- Keeahnee - 07/30/2009
- awesome story cool details and fluent discribing. smile
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