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I closed my eyes as I felt the blood pool beneath my finger tips. I felt weaker. I breathed deeply and opened my tear streaked eyes. My gaze fell to my knees, where I had balanced a sharp knife I had snipped from the kitchen. My blooded wrist was held against my shirt, soaking the shirt quickly.
I breathed, my lungs felt weird. I felt lightheaded, like I was high. This was my high, my addiction; and I wanted to die doing it.
Tears sprang in my eyes again as my last minutes slugged by slowly. I remembered the beatings I had taken, all the tears I had sheded. I just wanted it to end.
My eyes felt heavier, like a thousand weights. I needed to finish the job. I picked up the knife and kissed the blood stained steel before I lowered it back to my blooded wrist.
"Goodbye." I whispered, slicing my wrist once more. I cried out in a hushed whisper.
The knife slipped from my fingers, clattering onto the pool of blood at my side. I gasped, my eyes widening. My breathing hitched as my eyes fluttered closed.
My head tilted back, against the door as my heart slowed. A small tear oozed from my eye before my heart stopped completely.
- by Broken Insecurity |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/12/2009 |
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- Title: Goodbye
- Artist: Broken Insecurity
- Description: Suicide can be a powerful thing, but it can also be the best. Just a small one-shot in 1st person of a suicide.
- Date: 05/12/2009
- Tags: goodbye suicide cutting
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Comments (7 Comments)
- cgirl1234 - 01/12/2011
- that was so good you should write more
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- Fighter2TheStars - 07/27/2010
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Holy crap that was amazing!
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- Crusader614 - 10/09/2009
- Wow. So short and yet you can imagine it so well!
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- hailey The Fabulous - 07/19/2009
- wow awesome liture ilv it
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- Messy Miss Bunny - 05/23/2009
- Wow, this was.... Wow... I could really imagine this scenario... This is great!
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- hinda_luv - 05/21/2009
- sounds lyk a dream i had once -smiles-
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- scarheart11 - 05/15/2009
- amazing literature. you'd make an awesome book with this material...wow
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