- somtimes i feel as though im flying, but im really just falling. but then wen i think about how the world blessed me with everything and how i want to see more of its beautiful fetures and how i want to see u again, i spread my wings and i fly over this wonderful place and see everyone happy and smiling, but there's one thing missing and thats u. ur smiling face brings me back to life and wen u hold me its life im in heaven and wen ur lips softly touch mine its like i can be with u forever! and im happy, but then, i wake up and relize it was just a dream until i look next to me and there u r smiling at me.
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- | Submitted on 02/24/2009 |
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- Title: wings
- Artist: shatered wings15047
- Description: ......i hav no description.........
- Date: 02/24/2009
- Tags: wings
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- Rian_Lena - 06/17/2009
- Interesting. But I'm also going with the two below me. A little bit of grammar and spelling corrections and this would be amazing.
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- lala pokadots ice cream - 05/19/2009
- It was okay but no i am not sure because here you need spelling and grammaer so i am not rating
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- Dorian Raker - 03/18/2009
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The word is "You." Spell it that way. Similarly "Your" is not the same without its first two letters. Beyond this please pay attention to spelling, grammar, punctuation, and CAPITALIZATION.
It's cute, I'll give it that. But it is in desperate need of a rewrite.
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- thrivingtoexist - 03/10/2009
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wow
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