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heart Love Hurts
may and kolten
By:Andrea (xxwhere_r _mah_muffinsxx)
The first time i saw you was a dream come true.
I knew we would be together Forever
Forever is A strong word. But, I will still love you May.
Kolten- I love you
May- Awww I love you too!
Kolten- Forver might actually be the word.
May-Thats fabulous. I always wanted a guy to be sweet and as kind as u!
Then came wedding Day, with a struggle at May's work. Kolten never came. May, standing still, crying off more stress then ever,
"He isn't coming*2, Andrea! He said forever! he ment it. He isn't here! Why! THIS IS HORRID! Instead of just standing there with my bestest friend, i tried to comfort her. But all she ever did was think of how sorry Kolten should be. She cried and cried. I called her on the phone, then tried to comfort her some more, next take her mind off of that dam boy! But how dare he ditch his bride! He even got clothes for the wedding... But that only shows one sign of happiness of their wedding. No,
"I cant wait, or, "the wedding will be a total ball!"
It seemed like he didnt care at all.
May-I cant stand this any more. Im calling him on the telephone.
May calles Kolten,
Ring Ring Ring... Ring Ring Ring...
(Hi yew have reached kolten I-
May hangs up the cell
Andrea- Im very so deaply sorry May. I dont know what to do.
May- Its okay. I'll figure out some way to fix that boys brain.
Weeks later, of Kolten not answering his phone, also not being online...he goes on to gaia.
Kolten(in pm)-Im so sorry i couldn't be on. My computer had a virus i hope you are not mad at me May, my beautiful angel.
May(pm's back)- Then if your stupid computer had a virus, then why was your brother online? Huh? Yew going to lie to a girl? Or not?
They meet in Hollywood.
Silece is in the calm air of Fluffy's room.
o.o says kolten
-.- says May
Then finally May says something...
May-Don't pretend like you care. If you say something. If you dont. Leave you dik.
Kolten- Im sorry May. I didnt mean to hurt your feelings. I really still am deaply in love with you. Truely! Please believe meh!
May-Okay. I wont lie like you. I have always been in love wiTh you and i will never ever break up with you. We were ment to be!
Kolten- I knew it!!! I love you my sweetheart! I will never ever Ever! lie to you again. As long as my heart should live.
THE END
- by iiPeanut_Butter_Toast X3 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: Love Hurts
- Artist: iiPeanut_Butter_Toast X3
- Description: is it lov or broken hearted life?
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: love hurts
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Re-invented Zombie - 05/24/2009
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I don't really like the grammer. :
the story just went too fast and didn't really explain their backgrounds and where they were in the first place. They met in Hollywood?? Where were they in the begining. 2/5 biggrin - Report As Spam
- Rainbowy Soul - 03/11/2009
- itz cool but....... i still would've asked him what was up with the wedding and why didn't he pick u the phone.... itz awesome anyways... 5/5
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- iiPeanut_Butter_Toast X3 - 01/18/2009
- PLZ TELL ALL OF YER FRIENDS ABOUT THIS STORY IF YEW REALLY ENJOED IT xD
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- Enka - The Protector - 12/29/2008
- Love can hurt. But if it's true love, then there is that 100% chance to be able to mend it.
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- iiPeanut_Butter_Toast X3 - 12/29/2008
- PLEASE VOTE 5/5 its soooo romantic!o.o!
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- Xxwhere_r_my_cheese-itsxX - 12/29/2008
- i love it its a true love story. but i agree love hurts !
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- iiPeanut_Butter_Toast X3 - 12/29/2008
- i wrote this off of my best friend amalia and her bf kolten...i still think he is dumb... but let em last 0.0-.- -0-
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