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That day, the day we moved. I felt sick; so many great memories that we’ll leave behind. Mom said it would help us forget about the accident, I thought to my self how, how can this happen to us, as I thought I looked over and saw my older sister Kay kiss her boyfriend, say her good byes, and get in the car, then I saw her, Katrina my best friend, she looked at me, and for a moment I felt like my heart was going to blow up, she walked to me “why do you have to leave.” She asked, “I have to…mom said so.” There was a silence that fell over us. “O ok then, but can’t you stay with your cousin.” She asked, “no I asked mom and she said that we need to move away, s-so we can move on.” I said with my head down. I couldn’t look her in the face because I know shed cry, and I hate to see her cry,” JOEY TIME TO GO!” my mom yelled at me, “um I have to go.” I told Katrina, I gave her a hug a started walking to the car, “wait.” Katrina said, I stopped, I didn’t look at her. “Look at me.” She told me. I turned around, looked at her; she looked at me, silences. She came to me with her head down, I said nothing, and she looked up at me and kissed me. I looked at her, she looked at me, and we said nothing. “JOEY TIME TO GO!” mom yelled at me again, she then walked away a didn’t look back at me, I got into the car, I closed my door and mom drove away. As we drove down the road I looked out the window a saw her, I saw the tears that shined in the sun light stroll down her cheek and fall to the ground, and as I looked at her I found my self saying “I’ll miss you…Katrina.”
We had been on the road for a wile and it hit me, “mom you never told us what this place is called.” I said,” what are you talking about she said.” The name or the town we’re moving to.” I said, “O it’s called Haven Hill.” She said with a big smile on her face. Then she handed me a pamphlet. I examined the pamphlet it was a light blue and on the top in big gold letters said Haven Hill. “Wow!” I said “it says here that the place was founded after a war.” I said “o my.” Mom said with her eyes still glued to the road. “I continue to say that it was belted so the two people could get over their differences.” “Hey let me look at that.” Kay said. “No” I said. Kay them shot back and look at me and said “let me see it you little punk” “no you rat faced freak” I responded. “hey.” Mom said to us “rat faced.” Kay said to me. “Hey” mom said louder “you ugly little monkey give it to me!” Kay said “HEY!!” mom yelled at us. “YOU TWO ARE GOING TO STOP FIGHTING RIGHT NOW!!!” she said looking at us. There was a little silence between the three of us, then “MOM LOOK OUT!!!!” Kay yelled, as mom turned her head to the road I saw the horror that was about to unfold, a little girl, a little girl right in the middle of the road, with what looked like some type of white sleeping gown, she was bare foot, and she had long blonde- brown hair, “MOM!!” I yelled, mom slammed on the breaks, but it was too late. The car plowed into the girl, her small body hitting the hood of the car and then her head full of hair hitting the windshield, and the final thing was the blood, the blood that was smeared on the windshield. Mom swerved the car in to a ditch. The wind got knocked out of me when I hit the car seat. Them a silence, so silent you could hear the dead talk. When I opened my eyes all I saw was the red of the blood on the window. I looked around, mom and Kay were gone, and then I thought of my dad. “MOM!!” I yelled “KAY!!” I yelled louder this time with tears swelling in my eyes. “WHAT.” I heard her yell back. I looked wear her voice was coming from, she was outside. I made my way out side of the car. When I got out of the car I saw Kay on the other side of the road, looking for something? “What are you looking for Kay” I asked, “we should be-” I look toward to car, “the little girl is gone.” My mom said to me, as I look at the car I noticed, there was no little girl like my mom said, there was no blood, any were not on the road, not even on the car. Then I looked to my right and an old sigh, in gold letters said, welcome to Haven Hill.
- Title: skull valley chp 1
- Artist: justaru
- Description: a story about change in a family. they move to an small town trying to foget adout a death in the family. but there is somthing in the town, somthing evil and it wants them.
- Date: 12/16/2008
- Tags: skull valley
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Comments (4 Comments)
- JungJessica - 03/02/2011
- A very good,interesting story you've wrote. I'll give it a 4/5, but there are some miss correct words in the text. But keep up with the good work!
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- justaru - 09/16/2010
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thanx u
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- humpty_bumpty - 07/29/2009
- pretty good story plot, i give it 3/5
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- Redreap - 12/23/2008
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Walls of text... bad. Also, it seems to be misplaced.
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