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I ne'er was struck before that hour
With love so sudden and so sweet.
Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower
And stole my heart away complete.
My face turned pale, a deadly pale.
My legs refused to walk away,
And when she looked what could I ail
My life and all seemed turned to clay.
And then my blood rushed to my face
And took my eyesight quite away.
The trees and bushes round the place
Seemed midnight at noonday.
I could not see a single thing,
Words from my eyes did start.
They spoke as chords do from the string,
And blood burnt round my heart.
Are flowers the winter's choice
Is love's bed always snow
She seemed to hear my silent voice
Not love appeals to know.
I never saw so sweet a face
As that I stood before.
My heart has left its dwelling place
And can return no more. /color
- by XxXx-Unforgiven-Soul-xXxX |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/02/2008 |
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- Title: First Love
- Artist: XxXx-Unforgiven-Soul-xXxX
- Description: First Love
- Date: 12/02/2008
- Tags: first love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- sporosofyadah - 01/16/2014
- Why is this poem posted in non-fiction? Shouldn't it be in poetry and lyrics? Am I taking crazy pills people?
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- iiDorKuS-- - 02/07/2009
- ok to me
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- pure seyelance - 01/13/2009
- this was good...not great,..but 4/5 ( better than 2/5)
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- SunnyEmdee - 12/13/2008
- It has a really nice ring to it.
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- cpl snake - 12/02/2008
- Ya lets not. Poetic but seems as common as the "roses are red" crap. 2/5
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