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i need someont to jugde my book heres a input from it!!!
Thomas McCall 13 story
Well my story would probaly start the day i was born.That day my mother died.it was aid she would never have kids.but she did and died doing it.well as a baby there r no pics of me.i guess my father didnt care.
And then wen i turned 5.he would strip me of my clothes and beat meover and over.even at a young age i would fall alsleep cring.at the age of 6,school startedand my dad would only beat me where the buries didnt show.at the age of 8 he stopped beating me and did something far worse. he started not only to strip me of my clothes. he also took off his clothes as welll. it was horrible.the things he wood do to meit wqas pure torture.i dont even want to disribe it.
but at the age of 10 one of my teachersnotied a heckie on my neck.she knew something wasnt right and called the ops.i am glad she did.i told them wat happened and they placed me in a nice safe foster home.i wasdoing good until age 12. i started acting out in school.so my fosterparents brought me to c dr.peter.and i have been with him 1 year
- by Peter-BlueJay |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/13/2008 |
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- Title: Thomas' Story
- Artist: Peter-BlueJay
- Description: it is about a boy and his story of life
- Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: thomas story
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Peter-BlueJay - 10/14/2008
- ok i no my spelling suks so shhh...... lol yall think i should add anther story or something???
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- ShinichiSherlock - 10/14/2008
- Spelling
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- The Commander_500 - 10/13/2008
- man that sad man
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- wall2wall3 - 10/13/2008
- Wow,now that a hell of a good story
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- fifteenth-red-balloon - 10/13/2008
- Pretty good, yet sad
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